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Silvia de Negrobosco's avatar

That was excellent and hilarious! I always feel that explicit spiritual journeys are very difficult to write, but you make it look easy peasy Greg Lemon squeezy

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Damn, that was amazing, Greg. Cosmic indeed. Outside the box for sure which is the best place to be and illuminating as madness, good madness that comes with blows to the head, on fire as it gets. Nicely done!

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Greg Lemon's avatar

In my opinion, the highest regard a man can receive is a complement from a person whose work they admire.

That person, Victor, is you.

Thank you so much for your comment, it means the world to me.

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

You're welcome, Greg. And thanks for your most gracious reply.

I keep thinking about your story. It's all so beautiful and odd, but the scene that really stands out for me is the one with the bicycles circling. And the man in black who could educate about:

"...dark alliance, conspiring since the dawn of time to slowly but ruthlessly annex the human soul."

Wow... Great job!

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Greg Lemon's avatar

"I keep thinking about your story..."

I am filled with joy to hear this. What more could a writer ask for? :)

And yeah, Mustache Man is pretty rad if you get him as a sub. You should see his documentary on _____________. Hopefully it's still online somewhere.

:)

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